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FIC: Mysteria: Myth of the Siren [Chapter XIV] 
18th-Dec-2008 09:11 pm
FIC: Mysteria: Myth of the Siren
AUTHOR: [info]soloscry (http://geocities.com/soloscry)
PAIRINGS: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu, Changmin/Keita
RATED: NC17
SUMMARY: A cursed Siren must find the One to lift the eternal darkness cast upon his eyes. But can the beautiful creature of the sea be able to purify the malicious heart of the One? Be able to lure him away from the blood that has been shed?
WARNINGS: Angst. Romance. Horror. Sex. Blood. Sorcery. Comic relief (sometimes).

| PROLOGUE, I, II, & III | IV | | V | VI | VII | VIII | IX | X | XI | XII | XIII |

Woah. I never knew how strenuous and time-consuming college could be until this year (my junior year -_-‘). So I apologize for these long waits! But finally, in this chapter, you discover who Changmin and Yoochun really are XD *is excited*… welcome to the climax of Mysteria ^__^! First real YunJae moments in this chapter. YooSu are going through a rough patch. Changmin and Keita are split up now. The plot continues.

<3 I hope you will enjoy this update <3!!!! It’s a good sized chapter for you today, please forgive me for the long wait (that is, if anyone is still waiting *sighs*).

I really suggest re-reading at least the last chapter before tackling this one ^^.

NEW CHAPTER:


<.oO{@}Oo.>

Mysteria:

Myth of the Siren

<.oO{@}Oo.>

Chapter Fourteen




The breathtaking sight of luscious dark green trees and the smoldering bright red sun did nothing to ease the tension crackling in the air that surrounded the trio descending the Dragnian mountains.

Gone was the treacherous typhoons and in its wake resided a peaceful atmosphere, quiet and rich with natural life.

Yunho frowned as he followed the Siren down the path. Jaejoong was… strange. Of course, Sirens were strange to begin with. However, the boy looked worn and at any moment, the boy was likely to collapse, “Where are we headed?”

Jaejoong held fast to his fluttering white cape and pulled it over his trembling body. His newly acquired vision was pounding, the edges around the scenery hazy and his eyes throbbing, “… to King Jung.”

Sungho was merrily skipping ahead of them, his bright grin causing more than just a little alarm, “The One.” He turned, his demeanor swiftly changing back to the mellow man Jonghyuk respected, “The Fire will be most pleased.”

Yunho’s glowing onyx eyes became slightly more pronounced, the wind shifting as a result, “Why is this Fire person looking for my father?”

Jaejoong suddenly stumbled, his world tilting. His knees buckled and he groaned. Ah… my head… feels like it’s going to explode…

Yunho moved to his side, his prediction proving correct, and his hand came up to touch Jaejoong’s shoulder, “Are you okay, Siren?”

Jaejoong shook his head, squeezing his eyes shut, “It… it hurts…” His mind was being dissected. Already the invasion felt familiar, he prepared himself quickly before icy fingertips plunged into his psyche.

[MEMORY]


The temple was large and grand in both its exterior and interior. Gold and bronze outlined the colossal structure and within it sat the brilliantly sculptured marble figures of the Gods.

Taemin kneeled before the statues with the look of determined concentration. He has been kneeling for the past six days, his body completely numb save for the sharp pain piercing his knees.

At the corner of his eye he saw Dana, his fellow priestess. She watched him, a grim expression marring her beautiful face. Though distressed, she dared not speak.

The sound of dripping water was suddenly interrupted by a sharp clack of wood, signaling a new sunrise to the East of the temple.

Taemin immediately bowed, his forehead meeting the dirt floor with precision, blood marking his connection to the Earth. He closed his eyes and whispered a long prayer. Faith in his Gods and loyalty to his country, Taemin followed the prayer with summons.

For a few seconds, there was only absolute silence. The temple was devoid of sound, even the raspy sound of breathing and the soothing sound of wind ceased. At the exact moment of the seventh day, Taemin waited patiently.

Slowly, the dirt floor directly beneath the statues became wet with cool water. Water slowly rose from the Earth until Taemin’s bowing figure was completely submerged in the pure crystalline water.

The water was a beautiful blue, a sign of its divine origin.

Taemin kept his head bowed, his trust in the Gods keeping him calm within the depths of the mystic water. Oxygen was the last thing on his mind.

The water alternated between warm and cool, then hot and cold. For what felt like an eternity, it rippled and swayed. Thinking. Finally, as if reaching a decision the water swirled, bursting into a million droplets before collapsing back into itself. A figure quickly formed within the vortex of confused water. An arm and then a leg, at the core a black hole gaped … a deep voice murmured softly from the watery abyss, “I will help you in your quest, Prophet… tell me what you wish from me.”

Taemin closed his eyes again until the dark figure nodded and confirmed, “It shall be done.”

Immediately the water lost its structure, splashing heavily back down into the Earth. In its place were two glowing orbs. One blue and one red. They both took masculine forms, kneeling on one knee casually.

The first had glowing cerulean blue eyes, the orb surrounding him turning into water and then ice before disappearing. He stood, his lips pulling into a distant smirk. He said nothing, completely relaxed and nonchalant as he gazed softly at Taemin’s bowed head.

The second was tall, his long limbs oddly graceful in his position. His eyes glowed just as brightly as the first, only they were the color of burning red ambers. Flickering beneath him were licking flames. He did not stand, but instead, opt to remain on his one knee. Kneeling upon it as he eyed Taemin with a deep frown set against his smooth handsome face.

[/MEMORY]


Jaejoong shifted, warmth enveloping his shivering form. He forced his eyes to open, gazing straight up into the glowing onyx of Yunho’s eyes, “…” He felt himself smile before letting his translucent eyelids drop. Sight, as it were, has become a burden.

The energy he felt from the two divine beings in the Fire’s memory felt familiar. The dense power they emitted was identical to those of Yunho’s companions back when he had encountered them in Soran.

So I was amongst Gods… Jaejoong slowly sat up from Yunho’s loose hold and shook his head at the Prince’s confusion, “The Fire only gives me short flashes of memory. He knows your Captain and your Lieutenant.”

Yunho raised an eyebrow, “What does this all mean?”

Sungho rolled his eyes, pulling Jaejoong and Yunho quickly to their feet, “Obviously, it means we need to get to Dakria. Let’s go.” He leaned against Jaejoong with a companionable squeeze, a rather wicked grin immerging grotesquely from his pale face, “Perhaps by the time we get there, Yunho’s brother would have recovered enough to follow.”

At that moment, Yunho stiffened but could not react as he was forcefully pulled down the path.

The powerful General of Dakria had forgotten all about his brother. He blinked.


<.oO{@}Oo.>



“Lieutenant Choi.” Heechul stood at attention as Shiwon entered the conference room, “Our platoon is ready to march.”

Shiwon quietly sat down, his expression wary, “How could such a sickness exist?”

Heechul relaxed his body, his eyes shifting downward, “Some kind of psychic force touched the Fortress. When the Fortress defenses retaliated, this was the effect of the burst.”

“Has Captain Park sent any orders?”

“Not yet. We were only to prepare for departure.”

Shiwon nodded, “Have you spoken to the other platoon sergeants?”

Heechul shook his head again, “Unfortunately, I am the only one unaffected by the sickness. As are you, Lieutenant.”

Shiwon stood up, “You said that this may have occurred because of a magick-based attack?”

Heechul looked away, his eyes darting to the ceiling before sinking to the floor again, “That. Or…”

Shiwon looked at him, standing up straight, “Or what?”

Heechul moved to hold his forehead, “Shiwon… don’t you feel different? We were unaffected by the sickness, perhaps…”

“What are you trying to say?”

Heechul shook his head, “I feel as if a shield in my mind has been lifted. The Fortress defenses managed to deflect the spell from the others, creating a sickness. But for us and Captain Park’s circle… I think it only managed to slow down the affects.”


<.oO{@}Oo.>



The winding trails up the steep mountain were ringed with bright green bushes. Tall trees lined the path and brilliant flowers bloomed majestically on their branches.

Keita looked behind him and walked towards a dark gray boulder to rest. He has trekked up at least half of the mountain by now.

It truly has been a long century since he’d stepped foot on Dragnia.

[MEMORY]


Junsu stood straight before the new King of Dakria, his crystalline flute poised beside him. His eyes were blank, “Sire, in order to create such a space, we will need an area untouched by magick…” His white outfit clashed against the dark backdrop of the Dakrian throne room, “Such a place is unheard of.”

King Jung, the former Prince Jung, narrowed his eyes, “Do you have an objection then, Siren? My father has passed away, I suggest you straighten your attitude with me.”

Junsu’s lips tightened, “What you are asking is impossible.”

Jaejoong touched Junsu’s arm, pulling him back. They exchanged a quick look before Jaejoong stepped up, his eyes piercing King Jung’s with displeasure, “As far as we know, sire, the Prophet has done nothing that would warrant such a punishment.”

Off to the side, Taemin sat immobilized by two guards, a clamp secured across his mouth to keep him from speaking. Taemin looked at the Sirens meaningfully, their mind-speak loud and clear before he glared hatefully at King Jung, tears streaming down his cheeks.

Keita glanced at the Prophet, his hands tightening against his violin, “We will trap him on the Dragnian mountains.”

Junsu and Jaejoong turned to look at him in surprise, “What? We can’t do that…”

Keita gave them both a firm nod, “If the King commands it, it will be done.” He turned and motioned for the guards to follow him.

Glaring at the King, Junsu scoffed and pulled Jaejoong after Keita’s retreating form.

“What are you thinking, Keita? We can’t mess with natural order.”

Keita grabbed Taemin roughly, “Guards, you may leave. I have no need for you.”

The guards saluted, “Yes, sir.” And promptly retreated.

Keita released the Prophet the moment the men were out of sight.

They all stared at each other as Taemin removed the clamp from his lips. There was no need for words amongst telepaths.

Keita looked at Taemin, “You know what we must do…”

Taemin watched him, “Will you be able to get to Yoochun and Changmin in time?”

There was a silence that made Taemin’s body shudder, but Keita’s soft voice left them all resigned, “… I will try my best. But I cannot promise you anything.”

[/MEMORY]


They didn’t make it.

Keita covered his eyes, exhaustion pulling his weight to the dirt path. For the life of him, he could not remember what happened after the black hole was created.

His violin controlled time, Jaejoong’s voice commanded the elements, and Junsu’s flute manipulated space… with their joint efforts, a dimensional pocket was created at the top of Dragnia and Taemin was forced to remain there… banished from the world. Did he not make it to Changmin and Yoochun? Even for the wielder of time, such an answer seemed out of reach.

How did they end up in Mysteria? How did Yoochun and Changmin… become soldiers of the Dakrian militia?

What crucial event happened a century ago… that created this mess?

“Keita?!”

The violinist jolted out of his thoughts, his head snapping up at the familiar sound of Jaejoong’s voice. A wave of relief choked him as he stumbled to stand, his arms flew open to embrace Jaejoong as the other Siren ran towards him.

With his memories securely tucked away in his mind, Keita felt as if he has been away from Jaejoong for this entire century, not just the few months that they have been apart.

Behind Jaejoong’s flowing white cape was Prince Yunho, the son of King Jung. Keita watched him before shifting his gaze over to the other telepath in the group.

Sungho smiled, “Hello.”

Keita stared at him for a while, unable to speak.

The man’s eyes glinted mysteriously as he ushered Prince Yunho towards him, “Looks like we have another traveling companion.”

Keita’s eyes narrowed, “Where are you going?” Keita looked back towards the road ascending the mountain, “What of Taemin?”

Jaejoong stiffened, pulling out of Keita’s arms, “You know Taemin?”

“I recovered my memories…” Keita looked into Jaejoong’s eyes and frowned, “Do you remember?”

“I only know what Taemin allows me to know.” Jaejoong sighed and looked over to Yunho, “I don’t quite understand what he has to do with all of this…”

Sungho chuckled, “Like I said… you were looking for the One. But not the right one.” The man walked ahead, “If you want to recover your eyesight fully, Jaejoong, I would hurry along now. The Fire grows wary.”

Yunho stepped closer to Jaejoong, his eyes finally melting back into a natural brown, “What is all this One and not the One spiel?”

Jaejoong took in Yunho’s handsome face and answered, his voice light, “I really…” He looked away, gazing at Sungho’s cheerful gait, “… don’t know...”


<.oO{@}Oo.>



Bronze tea in a delicate little glass cup, the Hikari Gardens swaying along with the gentle breeze, the clearing bright with the morning sun… Dana smiled, taking a small sip of the light brew in her hands. Perfect.

A loud rustle startled her from her thoughts as a slightly irate Changmin strode into the clearing.

She smiled at his grumpy face, “Well, well, what brings you out here, Lieutenant?”

Changmin didn’t say anything, but instead took a seat across from her, his hands reaching out to pour himself a cup of tea.

She took a deep breath and relaxed. It was rare for Changmin to voluntarily spend time with her, “Feeling unwell?”

Changmin took a gulp of the scorching hot tea, his eyes momentarily blazing with amber before they died back down to brown, “That depends, Dana.”

“Depends on what?”

“It depends on why you are still lying to me.”

She blinked, quickly placing her teacup down to hide her uneasiness, “Lying to you?”

Changmin smirked, “Who do you work for, Dana?”

Dana’s gentle expression vanished, her eyes narrowed, “The Fire. Who else?”

“Why did you not tell me about the Sirens?”

Dana suddenly laughed, “What are you talking about? You are the one who brought him back here…”

Changmin’s amused smirk hardened, “There you are, Sorceress… lying through your teeth again. Or should I say… Priestess?”

Akira walked into the clearing, his loud announcement adding to the tension in the air, “Lieutenant! Fancy seeing you here!” Akira paused, his eyes taking in the grim lines on Dana’s face, “Ah… did I come at the wrong time?”

Changmin stood, his eyes suddenly glowing amber, he turned to face Akira, “No. In fact, I’d say you came at just the right time.”

“Ah!” Akira jerked back as a burst of angry flames surrounded him, he immediately pulled his sword out of its sheath and pulled back. He glared at Changmin’s smug expression and shifted into a defensive stance, “What is the meaning of this, Shim? Will you attack your own cousin?”

Changmin snorted, “Cousin? Don’t you think this charade has gone on long enough?”

Akira straightened, his usual cheer dropping. He stared coldly at Changmin, “You remember.”

Changmin withdrew his flames, but his eyes remained golden with flecks of crimson, “You lied to me.”

Akira finally smirked, “Don’t be angry with me, Changmin. If I remember correctly… it wasn’t me who killed the Prophet.”

Changmin clenched his teeth, fire burst from the ground surrounding him, “You lied to me.”

“Is that all you can say now… poor Taemin, I can still remember to this day the way he stared at you in horror as your flames engulfed him. The day when the Prophet became nothing but charred bones and fire...”

Changmin let out an animalistic scream, the entire clearing raged with fire. He stepped forward and grabbed Akira by his collar, lifting him completely off the ground, “You lied to me!”

Akira laughed, his eyes glittering with mirth, “And in the end… your beloved Keita--”

“BE QUIET.”

Akira didn’t get to finish his sentence as Changmin threw him across the clearing, flames igniting from every direction. The tall Lieutenant lunged after him, his sword a blazing red-hot orange.


<.oO{@}Oo.>



The Fortress was uncharacteristically still and silent. Yoochun stared out the window of his room, his hand tightly fisted on the hilt of his sword. The sun was halfway through it’s course, the heat of the day rising in waves above the distant grounds.

Behind him, Hyukjae stood at attention, his mouth moving at an impossible speed as he reported, “Junsu is on the last caravan, same as before, Captain. The sick platoons have already started their march and will be a day ahead of us. It should take less than a fortnight for the battalion to cross into Dakrian borders.”

Yoochun looked down towards his desk and retrieved a neatly folded note, he turned and gave it to Hyukjae, “Send this to Prince Yunho… use the quickest method possible.”

“Yes, sir.” Hyukjae tucked it away into his pocket, “Is there anything you need me to do after, Captain?”

Yoochun turned away again, a hand coming up to touch his temple, a pained expression crossing his face, “… take care of my Siren for me.”

Hyukjae pressed his lips together, his face set into a determined line, “Yes, sir…” The soldier watched Yoochun for a moment before he finally stepped forward, “Will you be long, Captain Park?”

Yoochun grabbed a tightly packed bag from his chair and settled it against his back, “I should not be more than a few days… Lieutenant Choi will be in charge while I’m away.”

Hyukjae saluted, “Have a safe journey, sir.”

Yoochun paused, his voice slightly hesitant, “Don’t tell Junsu, keep him company until I return.”

Hyukjae nodded seriously, “I will.”

Yoochun nodded slowly, he forced a soft smile and he gave Hyukjae a squeeze on the shoulder before leaving the room.



<.oO{END OF Chapter Fourteen}Oo.>



Boring, ne? Hahaha, for some reason, all the action seems to always happen at the very end O_O. Right now, I’m trying to get everyone to where I need them to be XD. Gyah. Changmin is kind of behind, so I will have to catch him up in the next chapter. Junsu didn’t even make an appearance here…

Anyways ^^:

So the reason why Dakrians hate Sirens are now revealed XD. I know that some of you asked me why Yunho, Changmin, and Yoochun look down on Sirens so much ^^. It’s all King Jung’s influence.

I am… so… dizzy XD. I am kind of proud of myself for getting this far into this story. At first, when I first thought of Mysteria… I definitely thought “Damn. I love twisted plots, but this one might be too hard to pull off.” Well, whether or not that is true has yet to be answered. So *crosses fingers*.

I love Mysteria, I really do. I love all my stories of course, but this one really has a special place in my heart because I not only met someo f my closest LJ friends through it but it helped strengthen the bonds that I had with the LJ friends I already had before it. <3 Thank you guys for your patience haha, I really doesn’t deserve it T_T *huggles*. Thank you!


@ CHARACTER GALLERY BY PAIRING @
All pictures re-sized to fit

~Yunho x Jaejoong~



~Yoochun x Junsu~



~Changmin x Keita~




THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <333333333!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comments 
19th-Dec-2008 02:21 am (UTC)
Spot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 02:22 am (UTC)
^-^ ok i have to re-read it brb lol
19th-Dec-2008 02:22 am (UTC)
SPOT
19th-Dec-2008 02:27 am (UTC)
ohhhhh... the action was good! hehe you were finally able to post this right? lol that happened to me but i gave up in trying to post it...

hmmm... this chapter was really kinda cool.... i mean the line i like best was the one with Keita and Taemin, saying that he couldn't promise anything.. i don't know why but it was my favorite... plus i just re-read Cinderella of fear and pain like a couple of minutes ago... ^_^ i is in love with your writing!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 02:27 am (UTC)
LAME!! WILL I NEVER BE FIRST!!!
19th-Dec-2008 02:53 am (UTC)
OMG ITS SO CONFUSING YET I SOMEWHAT UNDERSTAND IT ALL AT THE SAME TIME!im such a loser.lol.
LOVED this chapter.still a little confused.but my mind works extremely slowly.so i should get it soon.hopefully X].i reread it.maybe reread it again.third times a charm right?

Changmin withdrew his flames, but his eyes remained golden with flecks of crimson, “You lied to me.”

Akira finally smirked, “Don’t be angry with me, Changmin. If I remember correctly… it wasn’t me who killed the Prophet.”

Changmin clenched his teeth, fire burst from the ground surrounding him, “You lied to me.”

“Is that all you can say now… poor Taemin, I can still remember to this day the way he stared at you in horror as your flames engulfed him. The day when the Prophet became nothing but charred bones and fire...”

Changmin let out an animalistic scream, the entire clearing raged with fire. He stepped forward and grabbed Akira by his collar, lifting him completely off the ground, “You lied to me!”



yes changmin i believe that we have established that he has lied to you.lol sorry when people repeat themselves i think its really funny. X]

AND OMG NOT EXPECTING THAT CHANGMIN KILLED TAEMIN! NOT EXPECTING THAT AT ALL!like were we supposed to expect that cuz if we were i feel reeaaaaaaaaaly stupid right now.but seriously.OMG!

i also love how yunho is all liek "wtf.i dont get it.tell meeee." and everyone just completely ignores him.poor yunnie.

anyway i am still amazed by this plot.i cannot wait for the next chapter!!
<33333
19th-Dec-2008 02:29 am (UTC)
Update yes!!!! but i have to go re-read the previous to understand this. Sorry my head is jumbled with all final stuff. Plus I think I'm going through my EMO phase. So depressed lately. *sigh* Sorry, I'm rambling.

At first I thought King Jung was Yunho.....yea I'm kinda lost. I need to review the previous.
19th-Dec-2008 05:10 pm (UTC)
It took me forever, ne? *hugglesyou* Your emoness won't chase me away *hangsonfordearlife* <3!!!

HAHAHAHA!!! It's okay to be lost. I tend to make everyone lost until the very last chapter ^^!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <333 ^____^!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 02:38 am (UTC)
Spot~ brb to comment!
19th-Dec-2008 03:54 am (UTC)
Hiya Yvonne! It's been some time ne! Sorry I've been MIA from your recent past posts. Glad to see you've been in a cheery mood, especially these past few days! Be sure to post piccies of all your cards and prezzies!

Now on to Mysteria!~~
Happy to see that Yunjae get to share screentime again, but when's the action gonna happen between them?? Yoosu and Changta already got theirs! Not fair!!! LOL!
Only Keita has regained full memories of the past eh, with Jae getting selective tidbits and Changmin opting to bulldoze his way into memory lane.
I've forgotten where Yoochun's heading off to *being lazy to read past chappies*! At least Junsu's safely on his way.

*if i don't get to comment again in the next few days then......

Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!!! Have fun girl!! <3333*
19th-Dec-2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Gah! ish so slow T^T
buuttt...ish going to save spot anyways,, lol.
cuz is Also slow at reading~
19th-Dec-2008 03:02 am (UTC)
wow, this plot is reallly twisted XP
and i guess its good that Keita has recovered his memories, although i'm guessing Su currently has no memories of that...>,<
i'm curious as to the Sirens' connections to Changmin and Yoochun,,,
this is somewhat confusing but REALLLy good<3 XDDD
can't w8 for more~
19th-Dec-2008 03:03 am (UTC)
Spot. >3
19th-Dec-2008 03:13 am (UTC)
I have to go back and re-read. I'm kinda confused. (See, I've been reading this story on and off for ages, but I've never commented or anything, so... now I need to re-read. I'll be back, though.)
19th-Dec-2008 03:16 am (UTC)
SPOT
19th-Dec-2008 03:47 am (UTC)
ok i finished the chapter :D
so thats what happened, i wonder how theyre gonna get everything back to where its soppose to be
19th-Dec-2008 03:25 am (UTC)
Ohhh...you have updated. Finally, some of the questions have been answered...of course still leaving some important ones to be revealed towards the ending.

I hope to see more Yunjae actions...after all, they are the ones still left 'in the cold' while the others have already established relationships with each other.

So I'm going to sit at a nice little corner and wait patiently for your next updates...^-^
19th-Dec-2008 05:23 pm (UTC)
I think some of you guys would love to bonk me upside the head, ne? Gyah!!!! I suck at answering questions it seems. This plot gives me a headache haha, I am constantly wondering which direction to take in order to give this story a creative unfolding *sighs*. I thought about just telling everything the way it is, but... gyah *facepalm*.

YunJae always has the slowest progress in my stories. For some reason, I can't just slap them together and call it a day. Unlike, YooSu, I find that their couple is harder and needs a more legit reason to fall in love than "Wow. He's got a nice ass." ^^

<3333 *givesyoucandy* It might be a bit of a wait again T_T. I'll try to make the next chapter super long or something to make up for it LOL!!!

<3

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!!! (AND MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!)
19th-Dec-2008 03:36 am (UTC)
you know... i just adore you.
19th-Dec-2008 05:26 pm (UTC)
Unnie *-*!!! I adore you lots too <3. *smooches*!

:3 Thank you for giving this piece of unbetaed crap and onceover LOL!! <333!!!
19th-Dec-2008 03:43 am (UTC)
OH MY GAHD!!! I'm late!!! *just had to comment before reading*
19th-Dec-2008 03:56 am (UTC)
ok...

I'M AS LOST AS EVER!! if not more..

but..hmmm..I'm speechless...maybe I should read this again later when I'm not sleepy..that might help..

so..

Good NIght my dear! and I shall be back...to re-read this chapter..

(I did caught the YunJae moment though!! hehe..the physical contact..not much, but it's there..*giggles*)
19th-Dec-2008 03:56 am (UTC)
Twisted plot is twisted O_O. Got a bit confused but I love this chapter anyway.

I love how Yoochun says "take care of MY Siren for me" instead of "take care of THE Siren for me". Such a possessive noun <3.

I can't wait to see what happens next to everyone. Especially Changmin (he's so hot when he's furious XD). And YAY for the first piece of Yunjae action :D. I think I'm going to spend today re-reading everything from chapter 1 just to make sure my memory is up to date >_<.

19th-Dec-2008 05:43 pm (UTC)
<3333 Oh! You are back?! *smoochesyou* <333

I think I will forever be confusing until the end LOL!!! <333

Yoochun possessiveness ^__^!!! I toyed around with that sentence for a while and ended up choosing that one :3!

ANGRY!MIN IS HOT SEX HAHAHAHA XD! I'm kind of glad I managed to get YunJae together at last. Now I need to work on getting them to fall in love. Gyah.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING *-*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3333
19th-Dec-2008 04:06 am (UTC)
Gahhh ~ to complicated to read when you just wake up @_@
btw, taemin is one of shinee members right ?
which one is him ?
19th-Dec-2008 05:50 pm (UTC)
HAHAHAHA!!! It's too complicated any time of the day, I think LOL!!! *headdesk*

YES!!! Taemin is apart of SHINee. He's the youngest one *-*. Ummm... Here's a piccie!!!



^__^!
19th-Dec-2008 05:11 am (UTC)
WHAT IS THIS? 23rd? FUCK MY LIFE.
19th-Dec-2008 05:33 am (UTC)
NOT FUCKING FAIR.

*points up* You see the caps? Oh yeah, woman, caps; I clearly mean business.

You will post and you will post SOON, do you hear me? An there will be more Yoosu, and Jaeho, and pissed of Changmin. And it will all be trimmed and tied up with a nice little proverbial bow of debaucherous-military-man/innocent-Siren smut at the end.

Oh, and sentiments for the story?

YOOSU <3... *ahem*
19th-Dec-2008 06:25 am (UTC)
Finally an update!!! LoL I wanna some YunJae hun!!! xD

Cant wait for the next chappie!!! Keep up the amazing work!!! ^^
19th-Dec-2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
I'm so sorry for the wait (OMG YOUR ICON IS SO ADORABLE *-*!!!!!!!!!!!) <3333

More Yunjae for sure next chapter <3. They are going to have a cute bonfire talk at night <3. LOL!!!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <333 ^-^!!!
19th-Dec-2008 06:31 am (UTC)
SNAGGGGGG!!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 06:55 am (UTC)
:O
that's quite a recovery there....I really liked that :D And please, please please do not make Hyukkie a bad guy in this story...it just doesn't sit well with me if he's bad. Can you imagine him bad Kyna? 'cause I can't XD remember that name? :P
It's sorta making sense, but at the same time, it's still not, but i can start to see the way this story is going though :D which makes me very happy :D
cannot wait for the next chapteR!!!!!
you're gonna have to excuse my lateness because I just sent out the card today, and I just got your card in the mail :P thanks for the card :D it put a very big smile on my face when i saw the card.
19th-Dec-2008 06:49 am (UTC)
i like to see how furious changmin was he know that dana and akira lie to him about keita...
it show that he love him so much...

and yoochun word *take care of my siren for me*...
he means junsu's his right...

although it confuse me a bit...but i still like it...

update soon...
19th-Dec-2008 06:00 pm (UTC)
Angry!Min is always my fave kind of Min XD. ^___^

Man, the ChangTa pairing in here is really... crazy. I hope I can manage to get everything out by the end!

Yeps! Yoochun is possessive of his Su <3.

^__^ Don't worry! From the looks of things, you aren't the only one confused <3! I'll up the amount of hints I give in the next chapter <3!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <3!
19th-Dec-2008 07:12 am (UTC)
OMG this is getting so intense and it really hasnt even gotten to the super good part update soon babe (dont let us wait that long again)
19th-Dec-2008 06:28 pm (UTC)
<333 GYAH!!! YAY FOR INTENSITY!!! Honestly, I personally thought this might have been waaay too close to the line between intense and corny O_O. I will try my best to avoid that next chapter LOL!!

<333 I will try to update again before the end of tihs break (which is in two weeks hahaha!) <3!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <3 ^-^!!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 07:47 am (UTC)
WAIT. BRB. OMG. WHY? NOW? WHY DIDN'T I GO ON LH EARLIER? WHY? OH GOODNESS------------------- *passes out*

i'll be back :D.
19th-Dec-2008 07:47 am (UTC)
DAMMIT. I MEAN LJ*
19th-Dec-2008 08:48 am (UTC)
..I think I need to read this whole fic from the start, I don't understand anything XD. Need sleep. And some memory refressing.

♥.

But I still want moar. It has been so long time when I read this and aldkjfkla. I love it, you know it.

Now food. We're hungry.
19th-Dec-2008 06:34 pm (UTC)
SLEEP WELL <333 ^____^!!!! AND EAT YUMMY FOODS LOL!!!! Oooh, speaking of food... I might want to go get myself some... ^^!

Mysteria is... surprisingly long. Gyah. Though, it is still quite short for the amount of chapters it has. LOL!!! It's at Chapter 14 and only has the same amount of chapters as Cinderella's 5 chapters LOL!!!

<333 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, BB <333!! *huggles*!
19th-Dec-2008 09:32 am (UTC)
SPOT :D

I've not read it so I've start from begining ^^

I'll comment u after reading it :D
19th-Dec-2008 06:35 pm (UTC)
<3333333333333333 I hope youlike this story! It's a bit on the weird side XD!
19th-Dec-2008 10:18 am (UTC)
omg at all the twist! @____@ I'm just going to enjoy the story until everything's revealed. So roughly how many chapters do you think this story will take? XDD
19th-Dec-2008 06:36 pm (UTC)
I am constantly twisting my stories it seems LOL!!! I know you guys would love to bonk me upside the head, ne? LOL!!!

<3333 This chapter would probably reach about chapter 20 at the least. At the most, maybe chapter 23? I am not known for very long series' O_O. My longest completed one so far only has nine chapters XD.

<3333 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <3333 ^-^!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 11:30 am (UTC)
ehh?
ding min killed taemin?
but he's still alive no?

i still can't quite grasp a lot of things~*pouts*

thanks for updating!~^_____________^
19th-Dec-2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
Yep <3. Min killed Taemin, but the reason why hasn't been revealed yet <3.

Taemin is actually dead, physically. Now it's just a vengeful spirit.

No worries, bb! I will see if I can help make sense of things in the next chapter!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <333 ^-^!!!
19th-Dec-2008 12:13 pm (UTC)
*Whack you for saying the wrong words!* You worth and deserve all this!!!

Hmm...i love twisted plot. I waiting for you to finish this story and i'm anticipating the ending of this story.
I hope you will upload this story when you are done. ^^
19th-Dec-2008 06:41 pm (UTC)
*rubshead* Hahaha, <333 thank you, bb <3!!!

Hopefully, I can end Mysteria soon! Gyah. It's been waaay too long O_O! Almost two years HAHAHAHAAHHA!!! <3333

I will definitely be uploading an edited version after I complete this <3!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING <3!!!!!!!
19th-Dec-2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
Omg~

This is getting interesting!

*-*

Thanks for the update!

<3~
19th-Dec-2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
GYAH!!!! <33333333333333333333 Thank you!!! I was afraid it'd be uninteresting at this point T___T!!! <3333

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!! *glomps*
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